第9节 雅思写作7分大师课-Task 1 概览段Overview 比较的表述

第九课:对比的艺术

对比的艺术 🎨

掌握描述差异与相似的技巧,让你的概览段更有深度!

开始训练!

第一幕:唤醒词汇库

“词汇风暴”热身

“来看这张图,60秒内,头脑风暴所有能描述 A&B (差异) 和 C&D (相似) 关系的词汇!”

对比相似图

教师总结:两大词汇库

对比 (Difference):
in contrast, while, whereas, a stark difference, significantly higher/lower
相似 (Similarity):
similarly, a similar figure, almost the same, followed closely by, a small gap

第二幕:对比与相似工具箱

工具一:如何描述“显著差异”

运动时间差异图

观察上图,哪个句子是最佳描述?

IMA 的判断

完全正确!使用 ‘significantly’ (显著地) 可以强调这种巨大的差异,是7分作文的标志。

工具二:如何描述“微小差异/相似”

网络普及率相似图

观察上图,哪个句子是最佳描述?

IMA 的判断

非常棒!’The figures for… were very similar’ 是地道且简洁的表达。

工具三:如何用倍数进行对比

倍数对比图

观察上图,哪个句子是最佳描述?

IMA 的判断

精彩!使用 ‘double that of’ (是…的两倍) 这种倍数关系,能让你的对比更加精确和高级。

“句子医生”拖拽练习

对比图

拖拽最合适的短语,完成下面的句子。

The figure for A was high; , the figure for B was low.

第三幕:锻造高分句式

四大黄金句式

句式一:
A was [adjective], while/whereas B was [adjective].
句式二:
[A] was significantly higher/lower than [B].
句式三:
There was a noticeable difference between [A] and [B].
句式四:
The figures for [A] and [B] were similar, at approximately [value].

“句式三连”挑战

出口额对比图

用三种不同的黄金句式,描述上图中的对比和相似关系。

IMA 的反馈

做得很好!你成功地用多种句式表达了图表中的核心对比关系。

第四幕:终极挑战

终极挑战:复杂饼图

学习原因图

任务 (90秒): 写一个概览段,既要指出最大/最小项,又要点出相似项。

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💡 参考版本

Overall, it is clear that studying for interest and for qualifications were the two main reasons, with very similar proportions, while changing jobs was by far the least significant motivator.

教师资源包 (备用题目 & 词汇表)

备用题目库

题目 1 (Pie Chart): The charts show the main sources of energy for the USA in 1980 and 2018.

美国能源结构图

题目 2 (Bar Chart): The chart shows the percentage of households with different types of technology in the UK in 2019.

科技普及率图

对比与相似词汇表

功能高分词汇/短语
显著差异a stark/marked contrast, a noticeable difference, significantly higher/lower than
微小差异a marginal difference, slightly higher/lower than, almost identical
相似similarly, likewise, a similar figure/pattern, followed closely by
倍数关系twice as high as, three times the figure for, double/triple that of
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